Review of Becoming My Daddy: He Makes the Rules

Hey ya’ll quick review before I go to sleep! Don’t worry, I’ll review Hotel Z tomorrow!

Becoming My Daddy: He Makes the Rules by [Austin, Alan]

Check it out, everyone! Alan made new covers for his stories! Isn’t this beautiful? I love it! ā¤ Where’s my Erotica fans at? Cause this series is a great pick for ya’ll! šŸ˜€ I don’t read much erotica, but Alan Austin is changing that! Very invested in this series now! šŸ˜€

I loved book 1! But what did I think of this book!

Official rating is…

3.5 stars!

but stupid Amazon and goodreads won’t let me do half stars, so I gave it a nice average 3 on both of those. that doesn’t mean it was bad! I liked it! I really did! šŸ˜€ Writing is really good and the details for the little interactions between Mr. Edward and Abby are great.

but that water park part? Boring! I wanted more Mr. Edwards and Abby! Anyway, here’s the review I left over on Goodreads/Amazon:

My office rating is 3.5 I wish Amazon and Goodreads had an option for half stars! 

I really enjoyed this second installment of the becoming my daddy series. The begging part was fun. & I loved the ending part where Abby babysat again. 

I found the water park part SUPER boring though. I wanted more interaction with Abby & Mr. Edwards. Not a bunch of giggling 18 year olds goofing off at the park. :/ 

But other than that, I liked it. I look forward to reading volume 3! šŸ™‚

So, not my most elegant review, that one. But it is getting Late where I am. past my bed time, lol. And I typed it out on my dying phone, so it was a bit rushed. but it’s all true. šŸ˜€ I’m back on my laptop now, so my blog post’s a bit longer, lol.

Again, not my favorite installment in the series, but fun! I am totally invested in it now! I’ll be buying volume 3 super soon! So, be ready for a review of that. (Just be ready for a whole bunch of erotica reviews!

šŸ˜€ Anyway, join me tomorrow for a FREE BOOK FRIDAY and a review of Hotel Z. šŸ˜€ And an update on that pen name I’ve been talking about it. šŸ˜€

Be sure to go check out his Amazon page and pick up a couple of his books to try! I highly recommend this series, but his parody short is great too! (I’ll do a review of that one soon!)

link to his amazon!

ā¤ Happy Reading, my friends! And Keep Writing, Alan! I like you’re stuff!

Love Lennie! ā¤

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